Conrad Rice

This a good beginning to what will hopefully be an even better story. I say that because there is some work that needs to be done on this story. I ...

5/10 Too Ron Weaselish for me

Very good. You use excellent imagery and manage to get us right down there with the main character. That is a significant accomplishment, one that I still have trouble with. ...

A very good poem. I'm afraid I'm not good at reviewing these, but aside from the peaces thing that others have already mentioned it is very good. On a side ...

I get encouragement, but most of the time it's just blind praise. My mom actually takes the time to read over everything I give her. My dad couldn't care less. ...

Two authors have really inspired me. Madeline L'Engle was my first favorite author. Her stories were filled with such a wonderful blend of fantasy and reality. I fell in love ...

With me it really depends. Sometimes I listen to heavy rock stuff, like Metallica or Disturbed. Other times it's instrumental stuff, like anything from the Halo soundtracks. And frequently I'll ...

I have to agree with the other people who've said On Writing by Stephen King. Not only does he discuss the finer points of writing, such as grammar, usage, storytelling, ...

I'm going to use this as a sort of introduction to myself through my writing, if that's okay with everyone. I've found my writing niche with stories where elements of ...

Makes me think of something like riches to rags, or something down that vein. Hearts in the Sea

Wonderful, lyrical poetry Your word power is astounding. I love the images you conjure up with each new stanza. I love it a lot.

Niles sighed and ran his hand through his hair. I could tell he was a little upset at what had just happened to us. “I can’t believe that,” he said, ...

Encantado The lights hurt my eyes a little as I walked into the village square, but I didn’t mind it all that much. They were party lights, meant to be ...

This was very unusual. I like the plot, and how it all comes back around again, but there's some stuff that's either out of whack or that doesn't work. In ...

For a bit of explanation, this was written as a sort of alien invasion on a typical American street kind of thing. I tried to keep some stuff deliberately vague, ...